Do you remember the time when I told you
That I was driven by a strange desire
With this very special sound
Surprising feelings of life
Irrepressible breath of love
In the splendid earth
Undefinite truth of ourselves
Deeply inside, deeply with you
This time have passed away
Sorry
You’re the first lover I will always love
Definitely a beautiful poem. Written in English, why not? Does poetry have any language other than its own? And I’d be very embarrassed if I had to choose between Dickinson and Hugo…
Thanks for trying. Still, I’m afraid french already is a challenge for us… (sourire)
written in english because it came just like that… wasn’t planned
d’autant plus que je n’ai pas parlé anglais depuis un moment…
Vraiment très beau. Cela aurait été dommage de traduire ces mots.
cela ne donnerait pas du tout la même chose en effet ; la magie des mots…